Tanka Raining Poem by Heather Burns

Tanka Raining

Rating: 5.0


Clouds are gathering
rain splashing on my window
releasing moisture
it continues to blow ill
the streets of life are flooded.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 14 July 2011

Nice effective poem. Rich in imagery and depth. Liked and rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'An umbrella' on page 1.

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