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Tiffany Rose Moczydlowski

Rookie - 1 Points (November 28,1996 / Springfield, MA)

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Tape And Glue


''My heart is very fragile, held together
By a bit of tape and glue.
It can't handle being shattered again;
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  • Rookie - 752 Points Tony Karas (6/11/2014 12:36:00 PM)

    Truly a most beautiful write..... tape and glue.... yes, I know that welll. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 487 Points Leslie Philibert (5/11/2014 5:19:00 AM)

    Not bad, the theme is well worked at, the idea itself not new, and perhaps the central metaphor tires towards the
    end, but a poem that will be liked (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 3,403 Points Savita Tyagi (8/17/2012 10:21:00 PM)

    ''My heart is very fragile, held together
    By a bit of tape and glue. Love your title and wordings. Very well composed. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Marcella D (7/12/2012 10:41:00 AM)

    Now this one had a emo-love genre/theme that makes sense. keep it up with other genre/theme's such as horror or comedy or any of them :) (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,391 Points Kevin Patrick (6/29/2012 8:48:00 PM)

    I read this after reading Wind and the Winds and I think this is a thousand times better; you threw away the baggage of trying to sound like somebody else, and seem to have a voice that is more acclimated to yourself and makes you unique.

    The tape and glue fell away
    As you took their place in
    Piecing it together and repairing my wounds
    With your tender love that fills
    The once gaping, hollow spaces where
    Missing components were never regained
    And the cracks that were forged

    See this is what’s great, fantastic use of similes and alliterations which don’t sound hackneyed from other works, this is all you and that is why I think it is really great. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Besa Dede (6/22/2012 9:15:00 AM)

    I like the way you use free rhyme to tell a story to the reader. Interesting piece
    Regards,
    ~Besa (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 473 Points Kaila George (6/21/2012 11:42:00 PM)

    Im not sure what to think, I had to read it a few times to understand, normally when I do read it just jumps at me, how people write I mean, this is good, it expresses how you feel with every line, just needs to flow together, but I still think you are a brillant poet for one so young I mean the first one I read just blew me away. Actually made my mouth dropp with a gaping look of wonder...smiles...anyway keep up the writes my friend...hope we are if you want you can leave comments on mine as well would love to see what you think. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 60 Points Kebe Iwara (6/21/2012 12:22:00 PM)

    I admire ur tact and craft.this only simply conveys a strong emotion of love and not to impress. Though not ur best poem, bt it conveys d emotion well enough. I'd like u 2 rd some of mine too. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Amber Glistener (6/21/2012 10:56:00 AM)

    :) This is a very well thought out piece of work. I enjoyed reading it and I hope that you continue to write for your whole life because you have a true talent here and no matter what anybody says, it is good. I'm sure you make God smile. The emotions in this piece are clear, which is a wonderful thing. It is very nice. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Joyce Rugg (6/20/2012 5:51:00 PM)

    This is beautiful! I love it. I'd say there's no way to improve this one, because it's perfect as is. Care to check out mine? (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lenore Lee (6/19/2012 11:48:00 PM)

    Beautiful simplicity. I like the story behind it; one person can come into your life and just make everything better. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Juan Guzman (6/19/2012 7:57:00 PM)

    to put it simple the poem feels as if you started off writing about something and then drifted into writing about something else and ruins the mood, but i guess it was an okay poem. sorry (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Matty Reynolds (6/19/2012 12:17:00 PM)

    I'm curious about the punctuation in this poem. It reads like a long drawn out sentence and left be needing air. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 5 Points Connor Whyte (6/18/2012 5:29:00 PM)

    When our walls break down and crumble away reseal them and make them stronger it is the only thing that keeps our judgment right instead of wrong. Very well written and people can always relate to these feelings. Keep up the good work good job. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,549 Points Hans Vr (6/17/2012 7:13:00 PM)

    NIce expression of an 'in' love poem.
    Let the glue and tape be the wonderful sunrises and sunsets, the soul power you possess and nobody will be able to break that heart again. (Report) Reply

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