Tears Poem by Little Red Apple

Tears

Rating: 5.0


Why these tears cannot stop falling
Why these tears are still rolling down
from my eyes to my cheeks moist my face
'It couldn't be done now', told me to my heart
But my heart doesn't listen to me
My heart closes its ears firmly
My heart doesn't follow what I want
to stop my tears from falling
'Hey, it can be done another time', shouted I.
'We still can do this later, I promise you'
Yet still, my heart opposes me and shouted back, 'It won't be the same! ! '
I don't know what to do now
Reassuring my heart, I never think will be this hard
Really, I've no idea what to say
While my tears are still rolling down on my face

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mimi Fakhira 29 January 2009

A beautiful poem enriched with emotions and meaning. Well written and wonderfully portrayed. Feel free to read some of mine.....

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tears can prove pain and anger, or joy and beauty, the description of these tears is well portrayed in these poetic verses, very good piece :)

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Izik Alcox 21 December 2008

touching piece with powerful emotional expression.

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Fiona Davidson 20 December 2008

Lovely touching piece...thank you

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