Tears Everywhere Poem by Tareq Jalabi

Tears Everywhere

Rating: 4.5


when you were brought to the sky
because youre more beautiful
its angels started to cry
and for taking your soul
began to feel sigh
why you took her
and left me to dry
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i tried to follow her
but my hands deny
come and take me
i wanna too die
for being alive without love
is nothing but a lie
tears are everywhere
here and in the sky
over spilled water
we all do cry
but why you took her
you knew you will feel sigh
if you take me
red no longer will be my eye

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Al-kurdi 20 July 2008

i will try..to not lie..and say hi.. to the new life with a die..........great emotions u have.

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Katherine Ng Li Hoon 27 July 2008

I can see a sad and touching story.(behind the scenes) May god bless you with someone that will heal the wound that had been carve upon you.

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DELETED NOW 27 July 2008

I loves this 1 the most but ur a good writer and enjoyed reading all ur work.

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Katherine Lenninger 29 July 2008

this is a very touching poem. I enjoyed it very much. Each line moved me and I love your style of writing. :)

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Serenity Prayer 30 July 2008

i loved reading it. great job. excellent.

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sara }i{ 16 December 2008

oh dear...it's really touching......i dont have enough words to this wonderful poem.....great B)

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Min Sia 27 November 2008

OH! ! ..I'm trying my best not to cry... But this one is one of the best poems I've ever read for this day!

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Reina Lorenzo 22 November 2008

how dare you make me cry, , sniff, sniff.. lovely piece.. interesting..

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Gutter Box 20 November 2008

Good poem. It was really sad...but I enjoyed it. You have really nice poems...keep it up once again - good job.

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Jessica Rolston 18 November 2008

this was kind of interesting...

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