Tears; I Love Thee Poem by Kazi Ahmed

Tears; I Love Thee

Rating: 5.0


Then I turned back; and told you ‘bye'
I saw dropp of tears in your eye
It was decided that we will leave
You looked indifferent till last minute
But when that moment came
You could not check
I also could not resist
Departing is so heart breaking,
I could not persist
Tears also fell from my eyes
I kept on looking at you
As if this was our first meet
The train came and left, unnoticed.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rekha Mandagere 29 September 2011

Nice sentiments, good expression.The tone of the poem is appealing. Marks 10

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Miriam Maia Padua 29 September 2011

.convincing pain..sweet at the end.. vividly portrayed in your lines.. wonderful and touching as a whole..

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Vipins Puthooran 28 September 2011

Nice poem, you draw the pain here...

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Vipins Puthooran 28 September 2011

Nice poem, you draw the pain here...

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Kazi Ahmed

Kazi Ahmed

Dhaka, Bangladesh
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