Tears In The Rain Poem by aislemyth

Tears In The Rain

Rating: 2.5


I look above
Hot tears kiss my face
The sky is crying
Stars are out of sight
I look at you
Hopelessness falling from your eyes
And pain of losing is tattoed on your soul
You seem so preoccupied,
Not noticing me
I close my eyes
You'll never know what i feel
As we stand here crying
On a night of anguish and rain

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chosen Reject 12 April 2005

sad theme...i like it..miss the comfort in bein sad.

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Lylyanna Pilewski 15 August 2005

aww that's so sad. But I love this poem! Lylyanna

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- from a student 26 May 2022

can someone please analyse this poem

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Fathima Midha K.M 07 February 2018

Fantastically I'ke! I also got second prize on writing poem about OUR COUNTRY, INDIA on the school competition. So I congrats the poet Aislemyth.

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Raul Castelan 26 June 2007

Well, you have love in you which is really good to show in poetry. Your poetry was fun to read. TAKE CARE! ! !

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Samual Harrison 09 September 2006

this is a sad and deep but very good poem, hope to read more of your poems Samual Harriso (Australia)

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Cara Green 30 September 2005

that is such a good poem! it's rly deep. nice peom tho i like it alot check out some of mine sometime

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