I look above
Hot tears kiss my face
The sky is crying
Stars are out of sight
I look at you
Hopelessness falling from your eyes
And pain of losing is tattoed on your soul
You seem so preoccupied,
Not noticing me
I close my eyes
You'll never know what i feel
As we stand here crying
On a night of anguish and rain
Fantastically I'ke! I also got second prize on writing poem about OUR COUNTRY, INDIA on the school competition. So I congrats the poet Aislemyth.
Well, you have love in you which is really good to show in poetry. Your poetry was fun to read. TAKE CARE! ! !
this is a sad and deep but very good poem, hope to read more of your poems Samual Harriso (Australia)
that is such a good poem! it's rly deep. nice peom tho i like it alot check out some of mine sometime
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
sad theme...i like it..miss the comfort in bein sad.