Eyan Desir

Rookie - 15 Points (caribbean)

....Tears Of Joy... - Poem by Eyan Desir

Perfume of tenderness
Soft hugs of kindness
Lips filled with honesty
A heart of loyalty
A brain of integrity
A voice of romance
Her Words exhilarate

That's the flower I hold
One that's very rare
With beauty that matches
Angels in the sky
Her beauty within
Matches yellow roses
Found in paradise

As beauty within
Wets my cocoon of life
Gladness slaps my face
Knowing the flames of love
Burns in my flower's heart
Gives gratification
Which makes me cry
Many tears of joy

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Comments about ....Tears Of Joy... by Eyan Desir

  • Rookie Lady Grace (6/12/2010 4:22:00 AM)

    very very nice.....maybe, i had already left my wrds for this, , but my gioshhhh, i lied if i say this is not good, , , coz this is super super nice...tears of joy, maybe u r right... (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Smiley Hooker (6/3/2009 2:37:00 AM)

    owwwww...what a very meaningful write! : -) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Noha El3wdy (5/23/2009 1:39:00 AM)

    woooooooooooooooooooooooow
    happy, tender, delicate (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Ben Gieske (5/13/2009 8:39:00 AM)

    Nicely written. Full of grace and charm. I like this part:

    As beauty within
    Wets my cocoon of life
    Gladness slaps my face

    A refreshing way of saying this. 'cocoon of life' has a lot of meaning (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Ben Gieske (5/13/2009 8:39:00 AM)

    Nicely written. Full of grace and charm. I like this part:

    As beauty within
    Wets my cocoon of life
    Gladness slaps my face

    A refreshing way of saying this. 'cocoon of life' has a lot of meaning (Report) Reply

  • Rookie DaNa XxX (5/13/2009 6:46:00 AM)

    hey Eyan! !
    i loved your poem! ! ..its so beautifull.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 284 Points Lalitha iyer (5/13/2009 6:00:00 AM)

    Travelling up and down and around and above and below and trying to cover the whole of the globe of emotions, well done. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Aarif Ameen (5/12/2009 11:50:00 PM)

    NICE WORK
    I LIKED IT
    GOOD LUCK
    TEN + (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jack Price (5/12/2009 9:40:00 PM)

    I think this is one of your best poems. Thank you so much for the invite.... I really enjoyed.10+ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Summer C (5/12/2009 4:12:00 PM)

    That's very nice! Kinda like how I feel about my own love. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Luwi Habte (5/12/2009 1:12:00 PM)

    hi Eyan
    u got a nice idea and
    good job too
    i like it
    and thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,069 Points Sally Plumb Plumb (5/12/2009 10:30:00 AM)

    Keep smelling the roses. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 80 Points Kesav Easwaran (5/12/2009 8:52:00 AM)

    i liked the glorified love your poem carries inside...good work...10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Poornima Kanasen (5/12/2009 8:18:00 AM)

    Hey Eyan,
    Very well written, indeed! 'Gladness slaps my face...Knowing the flames of love...Burns in my flower's heart', I liked those lines very much! ! Lots of best wishes!
    K.Poornima (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Carol Gall (5/12/2009 8:10:00 AM)

    beautiful poem Eyan you express love so well 10 (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,174 Points Saadat Tahir (5/12/2009 8:08:00 AM)

    I borrow from catrina....shes so right..very nice eyan
    Perfume of tenderness
    Soft hugs of kindness
    Lips filled with honestly
    A heart of loyalty
    --
    Great write..........
    cheers (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Naidz Ladia (5/11/2009 3:38:00 AM)

    nice expression of your tears of joy..nice poem eyan..humble but smart..i like this..naizz (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Catrina Heart (5/7/2009 11:01:00 PM)

    Perfume of tenderness
    Soft hugs of kindness
    Lips filled with honestly
    A heart of loyalty
    ------
    Great write..........fine poetic description of the beloved whom you have a tears of joy.................10++++++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 5 Points Janell Cressman (5/7/2009 8:57:00 PM)

    bravo! ! ! ! !
    your poems are always amazing! ! ! !
    it's brilliant! ! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie rago rago (5/7/2009 8:54:00 PM)

    eloquent write.........perfume of tenderness soft hugs of kindness lips filled with honestly a heart of loyalty......... natural and beautiful write....thank you for your kind sharing. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, May 7, 2009

Poem Edited: Saturday, June 12, 2010


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