Tears (Tanka) Poem by asma bahrainwala

Tears (Tanka)

Rating: 5.0


Your depressing sobs
And a deluge of tears
Gushing from your eyes
Burn a hole into my heart
Tears trickle down my eyes.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Reuben Matthew 22 November 2006

A very poignant tanka. The idea is beautifully rendered. Love, Reuben.

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alice sunderland 21 November 2006

its lovley asma. bears reading more than once. al

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