Telepathy! Poem by Geetha Jayakumar

Telepathy!

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Thousands of miles you are apart,
Dawn is setting its imprints here
While dusk may be yawing out there
We are in opposite poles
Attracting day and night.
Yet telepathy is working between us.
I can hear you while you can hear me.
Its the direct message passed from heart to heart.
It may just look like mere a coincidence
Surprisingly where no other means
of communication used.

Dear, in this e-world of today
Full of chaos and mess
Can telepathy play
its role without miscommunication.
As telepathy works at its best in silence.

Today our heart searches for internet
to send the messages world wide across
Everything is replaced by the machine
It does the wonderful job in no time.

I am just typing my favourite lines for you
So you are there to read those lines and
That brings smiles in your face
Which I can see it from here my dear!

So can we say E-World have replaced telepathy?

© 2014 Geetha Jayakumar. All rights Reserved.

Saturday, April 19, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: life,technology
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 20 April 2014

Telepathy is some sort of premonition.........Geetha........communication between minds involving mechanisms that cannot be understood in terms of known scientific laws........so spiritually developed people can communicate through telepathy............but it is losing its significance in today's materialistic world.................. a well crafted piece............

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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 20 April 2014

A nice poem comparing the machine-depended life and the sincere telepathic communication.

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Musafir .. 21 April 2014

Telepathy is still there and working for them who are connected with soul, e- comm is just another way. Dreams are the best part of connecting by telepathy. Wonderful poem ma'am, your every poem is so different and awesome. Thanks for posting it.

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Shahzia Batool 23 April 2014

interesting poem and interesting comments Geetha, and it's quite debatable whether e-word is a form of telepathy or not, i think e-word, emailing, text-messaging, all are the reasons of creating a big misunderstanding between the two communicating together...and telepathy is a kind of mutual harmony and understanding at the same frequency at an abstract level...but the poem is enjoyable, indeed!

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Akhtar Jawad 15 June 2014

It's a wonderful poem. We all are coming close to each other. Many misunderstandings are removed. I have a few experiences of telepathy but really internet, cell phones, television have killed many things including the telepathy.

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Vijay Sai R 31 May 2014

touch of emotions in a technically transformed world...boon and bane of internet...anyhow technology brings all hearts together...very nicely portrayed

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Khairul Ahsan 17 May 2014

'Telepathy is working between us in full wonders. I can hear you You can hear me Its the direct message passed from heart to heart! ' I have a poem titled 'Eternal Fantasy' where I wrote about telepathy, something akin to your thoughts. Here you said, 'E-World replaced telepathy! ' and there I said: ' Forget the submarine cables, Forget the internet connectivity. Even when they go to the graves, They connect through telepathy.' You've nicely brought out how messages of 'copy and paste' have replaced the messages of the heart. I appreciate the comments of all the poets made here before mine. These are words of wisdom. I particularly liked the comment of Shahzia Batool.

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Ramesh Rai 26 April 2014

Telepathy was recognised in India long back but till date it could not be developed in proper shape n form. Telepathy n dreams can not be ignored but is not accepted in common. i hope it shall get appreciation in near future. Thank you so much n much regards.

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Yash Shinde 25 April 2014

An art that can't be mastered by technology, The art of telepathy............this is what brings me closer to your poems.........we all share a telepathic contact, often unnoticeable, yet it has numerous everlasting effects! ......... .......E-comm, might have reduced the distance, but distance between two souls, can be crossed oly through a bridge that connects the hearts..............lovely write

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