Tell Me Mom Poem by Luwi Habte

Tell Me Mom

Rating: 3.7


Dedicated to my mom

Please mom tell me that you love me
Tell me that you can die for me
Hate me not as I do nothing
It is sort of nature, can be done by each human being

Even through, I can act as I was mistaken
Just forgive me say 'you are forgiven'
My princess my friend and my life
You were to be my all, you make me live safe

Tell me mom that you love me as before
Rather you hate me I prefer to die per a day, four
Please love me mom as your precious daughter
What I was mistaken, take it easy see it lighter

Love you mom as same as dad before me
So please I want your heart, open it and give it to me
Love me after your husband
I want nothing at all but love me after dad

love you mom
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
James Nall 21 April 2009

perfect description of a daughter wanting only the recognition of love and acknowledgement from her mother. well worth the 10 I gave you

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Fay Slimm 07 June 2009

Luwi this verse speaks heart from the first line - -and it has appeal which is so desirable. this deserves a 10 - - - keep writing... greetings from Fay..

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Nice work Luwi, i hope your mom realise how much you want her... how dear she means to ya... whichever way... keep it up and dont be rude to mom... life's good love Oluromeo

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please mom tell me that you love me tell me that you can die for me.... child, mom can do anything for you... beautiful write.... i give full 10 read mine o.nother, child, papa do u know and papa u too..

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AkosiDArk Sugbuanon 19 July 2009

nice poem there.....for sure your mom loves you soo much....she might not be showing it to you or verbaly saying it but surely she does love you....i liked it....

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Soumia Benmechiche 28 September 2009

I love it... wonderful keep writing

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 09 September 2009

A Loving poem of 'tell me Mom' a mother tells her child(ern) in so many ways how much she loves.

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Philosophy of a DewyFlower 01 September 2009

well expressed! it s nice to seek the affection of your MOM... there is no doubt, your MOM love you too.

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Rajaram Ramachandran 31 August 2009

Your love for your mother is well expressed in this sweet poem.

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Rafique Farooqi 27 July 2009

Your mother has a different way to love you......but she loves you more than an living creature in the world, you will see this love, when your are to leave your parental home, after being married to a handsome boy.

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