Template Of Smile Poem by Dr. Sakti P. Chakravorty

Template Of Smile

Rating: 5.0


TEMPLATE OF SMILE
esspeecee …24.02.09.
12.04 night

Somnambulistic I’m
Psychically, but
Traveling in
Your heart
Where is darkness
But reds in plenty
To moisten me.

Somnambulistic I’m
Want not to hijack
Your first love
Keep patience
O you.

I’ll be not
As Chase GM’s
Second; Better
Give me a wee space
For my solacement
Stay at far but...


Somnambulistic I’m
My legs are dissolving
By the solvent of
Tidy togetherness
Of yours.

Under the robed in
Morning red of sun
My blood: Flowing
In dark tunnel of
My heart where
Template of your smile
Intolerably beautiful
En-wrap with
Womb’s care.

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
rago rago 10 June 2009

well penned....................

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Bachha Chakravorty 24 November 2009

Agree with Poet Sarwar Chowdhury somnambulistic state Poet has well captured, ‘…My legs are dissolving // By the solvent of // Tidy togetherness // Of yours….’ Novelty in poetic imagination! Thanks for sharing Dr.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 30 October 2009

Somnambulistic I’m My legs are dissolving By the solvent of Tidy togetherness Of yours. Lively and appealing verses! 10+

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Agree with Poet Afjal. Fantastic write, wording and imageries too Ten++ well done Sir.

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Afzal Shauq 23 September 2009

Under the robed in Morning red of sun My blood: Flowing In dark tunnel of My heart where Template of your smile Intolerably beautiful En-wrap with Womb’s care. really a great write.. philosophical way of expression and psychological touches make your thoughts rich and meaningful enough.. I read through few of your poems too..and found that you are real professor and what you write is almost right and heartfelt.. really like your way of writing poetry..well done and appreciate your work...

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Mary Garcia 06 August 2009

Templete of smile, nice name for a poem full of feelings. Regards from Ecuador

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