' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' Tender Is The Night(Early Onelia Christmas Poem) Poem by Dónall Dempsey

' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' ' Tender Is The Night(Early Onelia Christmas Poem)

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Slowly sunset
dissolves the scene

taking the river
& hiding it

in night

(only the ear
hears it still) .

Even mountains
disappear

become a darker blue
within a darker blue

hues
within hues.

Only the memory
placing things where

it thinks they may
have been.

birds create
a tapestry

of song
that can be

almost seen.

the mind joins
...the dots

to create
what cannot be

yet is
a patchwork quilt of sound

where even silence

shines
like the brightest colour

and Time
tenderly

erases yet
another day.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ruth Walters 01 December 2009

I just loved this poem......... magical Ruthie

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Onelia Avelar 30 November 2009

really tender...wonderful magic verses... ('Tender is the night' is the titel of one of the best Fitzgerald's novels...) The sunset taking and hiding the river in night...I imagine it - the river like a silver thread disappearing in the darkness of the night...

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Patrick A. Martin 30 November 2009

Thanks for the images Donall. we are such different poets yet somhow we collide and when we do I think I walk away the better human being for it so again thank you for sharing your rare gift I do appreciate it- Paddy-10

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Dónall Dempsey

Dónall Dempsey

Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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