Teri Dosti Poem by abhishek sharma

Teri Dosti



agr tu dost hai mera
to aadten kahan se aa gai
jo dil dekhta hai use tune ye dosti sikhadi
agr tu aadton se parkhta hai insaan ko
to mujhe lagta hai nhi tu mere aur
kisi aur ke dil ki parchaii
agr ye aadat naa hoti tu hota dost mera
ye hi kehta hai tu mujh se
kya ye hi tera chera
ye rishta tha dosti ka
jo toda tune is addat ke badle
saalon ke dost ko choda tune is aadat ke badle
'abii' vhi likhta hai jo sach hai
agar tu kehta hai ki galti meri hai
to haan galti meri hai
ab mujhe aage se naa bulana
ye rishta aaj se tera aur mera khatam hai
agr mil jaye tujhe mere jaisa koi dost
to keh dena apne dil se
aaj kal dost badlne kaa zamana hai
tu kya jaane akelepan kaa dard
kyunki dosti hi to zindagi kaa khazana hai..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Abii Sharma 18 November 2013

okayyy broo i understandd this thankk u for complimentssss....

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Utsav Patel 17 November 2013

Bajot jagah pe mujhe galtiya mili... I mean baat kuch chal rahi he aur very next lkne me kuch aur hi ja rahe ho... Grip turant hi tut jati he... Ek subject ko pakde rakho... 5th line me kya tha? Very bad that was. Read my new poem will o' the wisp... Tujhe subject ki grip samajh aayegi... Good luck... keep writing mate :)

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