Terminus Sam Shing Poem by Marieta Maglas

Terminus Sam Shing

Rating: 5.0


When dining thunder rolled into madness,
Among the flowers and the wind of spring,
Your lost soul was embedded in sadness
To walk right to the Terminus Sam Shing.

With white clothes and lost thoughts, you were alone.
After a time, we think about your choice.
With dropping tears, I'm much more like a stone.
I would have sung, but I needed a voice.

You didn't try to live your dreams with me.
In agony, shivers from the black hole
Caught a soul never wanting to be free.
You're the destroyer of your proper soul.

Poem by Marieta Maglas

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

on the terminus some cleaving some ravenous parting has left the persistent reminder of soul waiting in lurch to find a cemetery in a breathing heart’s echoes

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Ivan Kodorkovski 20 November 2009

beautiful piece of work, written in deep thoughts 10

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Ramsey Lynwood 16 November 2009

The deliver of my heart's echoes in inside, And the destroyer of my proper soul 10

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Macey Calleigh 16 November 2009

Beautifully expressed - 10+

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Agnes Parker 02 October 2009

nice poem I like it 10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 September 2009

With nothing taken with me, leaving all beside, A voice in agony, that shivered to black hole, The deliver of my heart's echoes in inside, And the destroyer of my proper soul.......jopunetry to be performed all alone..nobody to accompany and al l loads to becarried bysellf.. beautiful words inhte poem....10 read mineyou go alone

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Marieta Maglas

Marieta Maglas

Radauti, Judet Suceava, Romania
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