Such tenuous hold have dreams
On reality, blowing
Aimlessly, galloping free.
They take unkindly to ties,
Prefering to fly, but catch
Them we can if we're wise.
Tethering dreams, only gold
Cascades, drifts then in gleaming
Star dust, which, handled dextrously
Sparkles, and while unfolding
Dresses us in night's ecstacy.
Sweet dreams, reigned in are a must.
Thus ideally we will see
The future rainbowed, visions
Of love will unfold, revealing
An undreamed-of bliss. - Hold then
Intangible dreams skintight
And re-live their magic again.
Reigning in on tether dreams... Fay... I see a gallop turn into a cantaloupe... thanks for the ride... aroha, Deana xx
Simply glorious writing Fay. It has such a beautiful flow to it, one I am sure all poets would love. Thank you. 10 Karin Anderson
Fay, it's magnificient, you chose the best words to create wonderful images..thanks best regards, joan
I think for a time, I'd like to plan my dreams before my sleep I'd think out scenes I'd win every fight if i were a knight climb mountains' and sour like a kite lovely poem Fay! food for thought
the rhythm in this piece is amazing.. only fay.
As this poem matured I could anticipate and now welcome the fine wine it has become. Lovely (as Fay would say) . Hxx
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
beautiful and meaningful writing..well expressed..