Texel Lighthouse Poem by Tom Billsborough

Texel Lighthouse

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On high dunes, the lighthouse stands.
Scarlet stem, white collar,
Its transparent brain obeying automated commands.
It casts a pencil shadow out to sea,
Mirroring its beam.
Time's instrument too,
Sundial marking out the sands
Where tides sweep in obliterating Time.

Thursday, July 28, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: time
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
BASED ON A PHOTO OF TEXEL LIGHTHOUSE ON THE DUTCH FRISIAN ISLANDS.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pamela Sinicrope 28 July 2016

Beautiful descriptive and metaphorical poem. I've read allot of poems about lighthouses and this one is a favorite. I love the way you think about it like a human body with a scarlet stem, white collar, and then the casting of the pencil shadow out to sea. To me, this is a piece that I would love to see you expand. There are so many directions you could take. So well done.

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Tom Billsborough 28 July 2016

I might take up my suggestion. It was a trigger for the poem about Grace Darling but perhaps there are other avenues to explore within the image. I suppose I was desperate to get both ideas down this morning with Amazing Grace running through my mind. I listened to the Hymn and took down the verses so I could match the rhythm as far as possible. A busy morning! Tom

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Mihaela Pirjol 28 July 2016

This is an amazing poem. The imagery is so vibrant, I can almost feel it before my eyes. I myself am very fond of lighthouses; I even wrote a poem - The Lighthouse.

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Tom Billsborough 28 July 2016

thank you, mihaela. I shall look at your poem now. One of our best is the South Stack in Anglesey, North Wales. I haven't seen the one in the Frisian Islands. I was just stuck by a beautiful photo in my book on the Netherlands. Tom

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Tom Billsborough

Tom Billsborough

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