kwane Lamb

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Thank You God - Poem by kwane Lamb

Unconditional love is so hard…
When you know it's best…
It is a job never the less…
"An all working job"…

No wonder…(GOD is GOD) …
The CREATOR of all that creates…
Unconditional love needs a power…
Powerful enough to cover all the bases…
GOD is that ACE…
Unconditional love…is a PLACE…
As humans we try to be that…
Oak tree but the family winds…
Blow much harder then we expect…
So (we ourselves) call upon HIS… unconditional love…
As to help us…give unconditional love…
Family, friends, and lovers…
Pull at you from all sides…
Until you are about to explode…
But…GOD…yes…GOD…easiest that load…
HIS unconditional love for you or me…
Helps ease the confusion…
You then realize the delusion…
Unconditional love is the…solution…
GOD BLESSINGS… keeps one from doing some crazy things…
No matter how hard the fight…
Or color of the plight…
Stay on track….unconditional love is (The) light…

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Poet's Notes about The Poem

GOD is everywhere

Comments about Thank You God by kwane Lamb

  • Freshman - 657 Points Chandra Thiagarajan (11/16/2012 11:06:00 AM)

    Like GOD we too should try to give unconditional love to all. though as you say it is so hard. And we should certainly Thank God for his blessings.This is a gem of a poem-I love it. Thanks and best wishes.
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  • Veteran Poet - 1,229 Points Thomas A Robinson (10/30/2012 7:21:00 AM)

    Very good and timely advise, thanks Whisperkwane Lamb. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, October 27, 2012



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