Thanks Poem by Jeremy Bailey

Thanks

Rating: 5.0


Nothing can really express the way i feel except for the word thanks.
Thanks for becomeing my friend.
Thanks for my 17th birthday present.
Thanks for being there when i'm down.
Thanks for going to all the football and basketball games
Thanks for still loving me even when all seemed lost.
Thanks for fighting through the risks to see me.
Thanks for giving me a reason to fight for something, fight for better, fight for life.
That with out you being in my life there would be no reason to be who i am.
Thanks for the kindness and love you show and give.
Thanks for not fighting when anger built up.
Thanks for dancing with me on the 6th of December.
Thanks for listening.


Fire Frog - December 08

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 02 February 2009

I like this very much. The repetition is excellant and the writing was wonderful. It is something I like to see from a young writer. A sense of purpose and determination. GW62

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