Arfa Iris

Rookie (13/08 / hyderabad, A.P, India.)

Thanks


thanks for making me comfortable.
on my first day at hospital.
thanks for standing like a friend,
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  • Rookie - 299 Points Harindhar Reddy (10/17/2011 1:56:00 AM)

    Hi Arfa,
    'thanks for making me smile again.
    and making me realize the pain was not in vain..' These line suggest your maturity, purity, clarity............... what not!

    You expressed you gratitude to him in style and diction with taking help of fiction '
    I wonder in boundless amazement how feeling flowed in the poem in row. You have natural aura and flair to write love poems.

    I bet you enjoy if you read my poem - A Dolly Bird (A Love Poem)

    For many love is a magic, for some love is tragic, yet others love is logic. But for you love is nostalgic! A hearty congratulation to the poet. Your friendly Harindhar Reddy. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,426 Points Dave Walker (10/16/2011 12:04:00 PM)

    Another great poem. Hope your getting well.
    A great tribute to those who helped you. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 840 Points Unwritten Soul (10/16/2011 11:31:00 AM)

    Oh Iris, hope you get recover faster..you know people said, if you have strong courage you will get better faster...i believe in it, you should too! ! imagine you can walk and having good days around again..it could be awesome right? ? ? so keep getting better and raise your confident that you will win from this illness game. Good heart from you deserve big smile in your face soon....Be strong i know you are....So what you waiting for? Smile and look forward for next day! ! ! ! dont lost hope..OK? ? Smile_Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Rishi Menon (10/16/2011 11:16:00 AM)

    An insightful poem that describes true feelings of someone that is cared for. Miseries come in waves and the stoic presence and kindness of that dear friend helps surmount all those tribulations! It is not a topic that one sees often. Brilliantly conceived and well written. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 61 Points Vipins Puthooran (10/16/2011 1:20:00 AM)

    Thanks giving is, I think is the great thing in the world and it's coming only from a great heart.... Superb poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Bella Hernandez (10/16/2011 1:03:00 AM)

    very sweet poem.... no one can be as greatful until they go through something like that! !
    nicely done... i enjoyed taking my time to read this lovely, thankful poem..
    ur Friend Bella (Report) Reply

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