Thanks-I-Am-Giving~~~~~(Ghazal) Poem by Susan Williams
Thanks-I-Am-Giving~~~~~(Ghazal)
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In my life there is room after room of good things
my man is one room for whom thanks-I-am-giving.
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I do not know what good seeds I have been sowing
but for not reaping bad deeds thanks-I-am-giving.
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Every day my life kite is tripping through the sky
and time zones are zipping but thanks-I-am-giving.
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The morning breeze is bringing a brand new essence
the blue birds are singing and thanks-I-am-giving.
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Hoofbeats rain thunder singing through the desert night
and the hills are ringing with thanks-I-am-giving.
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~~~~~~~~~~~~~©2011Susan Williams
Every day my life kite is tripping through the sky and time zones are zipping but thanks-I-am-giving. . The morning breeze is bringing a brand new essence the blue birds are singing and thanks-I-am-giving. . Hoof beats rain thunder singing through the desert night and the hills are ringing with thanks-I-am-giving.
The morning breeze, the blue birds, Hoof beats...are so poetic imagery and cleverly used as similes and working here very well, over all in this lovely poem we can feel the inspiration of self conscience, and she encourages the readers to copying her and collecting all good things. 5 stars *****
Yes, Soran, collect all those good images and sounds and feelings and blend them together for memory's sake! ! Thank u 4 the stars!
Robert M Smith- -Thank you so much for enjoying that line! ! !
The morning breeze is bringing a brand new essence the blue birds are singing and thanks-I-am-giving. . Hoofbeats rain thunder singing through the desert night and the hills are ringing with thanks-I-am-giving......thrilling expression. So touching. I love these lines. My pleasure reading it time and again.
I so appreciate the implied compliment when readers come back and read one of my poems over again
A beautiful heart is speaking through this poem.Wow- - - - - Thanks -I -am- giving.
Bharati, thank you for saying such a kind and uplifting thing to me. One thing I am thankful for has been the opportunity Poem Hunter has given me to meet lovely poetic hearts like yours and thereby know that good is still flourishing in the hearts of most writers on earth and evil has only a few devotees.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/24/2024 3:14:47 AM # 1.0.0.1119
You wrote this ghazal like a seasoned Ghazal writer......Thoroughly enjoyed it, thanks for honoring our request...10
I'm glad that you are glad I honored your request! ! Thank you for the compliment and the 10- I rather enjoyed the ghazal form and might try it again because it wrestles better work out of me. I can see a flaw or two in this one that I would like to correct in another ghazal... dang, writing these guys is addictive! ! !