Thanks To All........... Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Thanks To All...........

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Hurt made me grow,
Failure helped me to know,
Losses taught me how to make gains,
Some lessons I learned from pains.

No way, can we change our past,
The only thing we can do is to learn very fast
Present demands more duty
Future holds all the beauty.

I have learned to smile all the way,
Take the things into stride as they pave,
Life is all about how you take,
It is up to us to make or break.

Tides taught me to humble down,
Dust reminded me to settle down,
Today I cherish those lessons
Which allowed me to do “Thumbs up”

Sunday, September 6, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life,motivation
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nosheen Irfan 06 November 2015

Tides taught me to humble down...dust taught me to settle down. Great expression. Swept me off my feet

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Darren Jkoeryo 06 December 2015

Thanks from our side as well.

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Sonali Ganguly 04 April 2016

all the lines are really very beautiful. loved the poem. thankx for sharing sir

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Sara Militello 28 September 2015

For one so young, you understand a lot Asim Nehal. I especially liked this poem for its subject matter and how well you put it together with the last word in sentences rhyming.....without losing the meaning of the message.

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M Asim Nehal 29 September 2015

Thank u so much.........

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Deepak S S 07 May 2021

Life is all about how you take...Loved

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Suzon Albert 31 August 2020

Awesome poem to motivate anybody. Loved the flow 100

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Freni Karaluthara 22 February 2019

A very beautiful poem dear poet, that imparts the philosophy of life. Life is all about how you take, It is up to us to make or break. Thanks for sharing

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Juhaina Tumlu 19 February 2019

Nice gratitude. Liked the way you wrote.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 23 November 2016

A clean mind, cleare thought and cogent expression.

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