Truly written from the heart and no one deserves to feel this way, but people still do. i am one of the many people. this world just keeps getting worse no matter how hard you try to change it. i just wish that there werent so many people that have to deal with all of these feelings of pain, deception, and other things of the sort. very nice job on writing this and i hope to see more.
p.s. the only thing that i would do if i were you is maybe reread your poems before posting them to check for spelling or word errors to make sure that you get your meaning out, but great job and i hope to read more.
Oh girl, don't be desponded.The sun, the moon, the earth and all planets are so lonely.The stars are too lonely.Lonely are the people whom we see close from afar as we see the clusterd stars.Yet, everyone is very important in their lonliness.