Reihaneh Jalalian


That Lonely Girl - Poem by Reihaneh Jalalian

Somewhere 'neath the blue sky
But a little above the deep
Somewhere in this little universe
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Comments about That Lonely Girl by Reihaneh Jalalian

  • Rookie sky dreams (4/18/2009 9:58:00 PM)

    i loved the concept of raining, raining so there can be a rainbow so people will see there are more colors than black, very creative.. great poem! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Vincent Toll(Happy To Have His Princess Back) ^_^ (3/30/2009 8:24:00 AM)

    Truly written from the heart and no one deserves to feel this way, but people still do. i am one of the many people. this world just keeps getting worse no matter how hard you try to change it. i just wish that there werent so many people that have to deal with all of these feelings of pain, deception, and other things of the sort. very nice job on writing this and i hope to see more.
    p.s. the only thing that i would do if i were you is maybe reread your poems before posting them to check for spelling or word errors to make sure that you get your meaning out, but great job and i hope to read more. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 243 Points Palas Kumar Ray (3/15/2009 2:11:00 PM)

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    Oh girl, don't be desponded.The sun, the moon, the earth and all planets are so lonely.The stars are too lonely.Lonely are the people whom we see close from afar as we see the clusterd stars.Yet, everyone is very important in their lonliness.
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