I saw her eyes,
That day,
Deep,
Drowning in emotions,
Darling,
I can't forget those days,
When we walked hand in hand,
Those days,
Gloomed in overcast love,
The days,
When we completed each other,
And now,
All is gone,
Why?
Did my love felt short?
That day,
We met for the last time,
That ice-cream that we purchased,
Which melted,
Like we did in tears,
Thank You…
I will live with these memories,
You be happy…
very lovely..........a bit of imagery..............great emotions wonderful flow.......... :)
Agree Aung... Now what I can say is work is in progress... Thank You mate
a wishful pattern of each beloved, like dreaming of something that comes within the heart, a little way of saying...please stay... i love to read it 10/10
Very romantic. You need to do more to maintain love. Good poem and thanks for sharing
Ah..this write such a simple, straight, easy to bind head, really relax...i like the way you play with your freedom, free in the air with emotions, i truly enjoyed this! ! _Soul
Very nice Vikrant.Down to memory lane, the fractions come like this.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Would you like to create stunning poesy? Even machismo murmurs, 'Sedate Peri! ' Nib will penetrate cells of cute skin. All you need is just call me Darling. You are the poet.So u should try again to win her love with your breathing verses.Right?