Hakeem Rahim


That Night - Poem by Hakeem Rahim

That night, dem dudes didn’t give a care,
Pissy drunk and pissed off, lighters ina the air blunts and beer.
That night dem dudes was messed up,
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Comments about That Night by Hakeem Rahim

  • Rookie Ethan Mills (4/6/2009 10:44:00 PM)

    it seemed a little weird at first using dem'
    but when i started to read more it began to make alot more sense than i origonally thought it might (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - -1 Points Ivan Donn Carswell (11/9/2007 3:24:00 PM)

    Hakeem, the street-cred form of this poem adds a message which underpins its epihany eventing. It may disturb but it is brutally beautiful. Rgds, Ivan (Report) Reply








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