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After many Years, one day I saw
My lady in calm, and a thaw
Warmth of my emotions made thee melt
Storm of my love on you did pelt
Stones of sweet words, rosy flowers
Doubts vanished and appeared bower
You said me with love o' darling
Filled my heart as one gargling
Addressed me with as she spoketh
A strange ecstasy in heart evoketh
Love you, love you, and love you too
Are our words for feelings true?
akram saqib
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Saturday, October 31, 2009 |
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Saturday, May 08, 2010 |
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Comments about this poem (THAW
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Mehta hasmukh amathalal (11/1/2009 6:46:00 PM)
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Addressed me with as she spoketh
A strange ecstasy in heart evoketh
Love you, love you, and love you too
Are our words for feelings true? .....................it must form the essence and purpose of our life and in reality.. it fulfills our dram and desire too... lovely poem with deep meaning....10
read mine miss i mis you...mary to marry... she did not come...cuckoo
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Ejaz Khan (10/31/2009 12:03:00 PM)
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A nice ending and good question, though it's a great feeling, regardless of what the answer may be! A lovely poem, Saqib!
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