Thaw Poem by akram saqib

Thaw

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After many Years, one day I saw
My lady in calm, and a thaw

Warmth of my emotions made thee melt
Storm of my love on you did pelt

Stones of sweet words, rosy flowers
Doubts vanished and appeared bower

You said me with love o’ darling
Filled my heart as one gargling

Addressed me with as she spoketh
A strange ecstasy in heart evoketh

Love you, love you, and love you too
Are our words for feelings true?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 November 2009

Addressed me with as she spoketh A strange ecstasy in heart evoketh Love you, love you, and love you too Are our words for feelings true? .....................it must form the essence and purpose of our life and in reality.. it fulfills our dram and desire too... lovely poem with deep meaning....10 read mine miss i mis you...mary to marry... she did not come...cuckoo

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Ejaz Khan 31 October 2009

A nice ending and good question, though it's a great feeling, regardless of what the answer may be! A lovely poem, Saqib!

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Joseph Poewhit 31 October 2009

The last line said it all.

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