The Abandoned Pub Poem by Sina Sanjari
The Abandoned Pub
We arrived at night, at suspicious night
Night is the moment, immersed in the sound of frog
we arrived, tired, exhausted
and saw the world is the abandoned pub
Great write, but for my liking, too many words. Loved it. Peace.
Now that certainly gives food for thought, sends me to a few different places...I have the most fantastic imagery in my mind right now and so much happening. Fantasy, reality who knows...Magnificent poem.
Now that certainly gives food for thought, sends me to a few different places...I have the most fantastic imagery in my mind right now and so much happening. Fantasy, reality who knows...Magnificent poem.....
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/24/2024 7:45:42 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Well written.. The comparison of the world with an abandoned pub seems pretty appropriate and composition is fine too... Thanks Sina..
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