The Agony Of Success Poem by sreelekha premjit

The Agony Of Success

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he rushed to me
to share his joy
his new found achievement

glowing eyes,
pride-coated
confessed with gay abandon

the elation of success
the pains unlimited
the adulation received

endless his talk
painful for me to endure
my eyes twinged with jealousy

how could i tell him
what pinched me
is his success
the fact that i had no share in it
the pain of standing aloof

time shall tell him
i am no fiend
just an unhappy friend

But yes, congrats
keep it up.

Wednesday, February 6, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: success
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 14 November 2018

how could i tell him what pinched me is his success the fact that i had no share in it the pain of standing aloof..the fact of jealousy and the resulting strangeness is very well portrayed in this poem dear Sreelekha.. thank u. tony

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Preeti - is here! 08 February 2008

is it jealousy of someone elses success? or is it sorro that success away a friend? ! I liek how you've left the interpretation upto the reader!

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