Palas Kumar Ray

Rookie - 213 Points (India)

The Animal I Fear Most - Poem by Palas Kumar Ray

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Which animal do I fear most if you ask me to name
I'll surely say it's the race human (though I'll feel a little shame) .

They are the cruelest beasts I've ever seen, heard and known
(I'm afraid you're getting angry with me and you surely frown.)
But if you allow me to tell and to justify what makes me to think
Such awkward thought I might try to tell you all about the link. .

Look, at the creatures that you have considered to be very cruel
Are all extinguished from the earth as the human started to dwell.
Wherever they lived, on earth or in very deep inside the sea
The race human surely killed them not listening to their plea.

They could not save themselves by their might in an unequal fight
With the race human and have lost their in-habitation and right
To live on earth as the God's creation with the boon of life
The race human have made them to perish using only a knife!

What I fear most of human race is it's very sharp brain that kills
Not only who belong to its enemies but also whomever it feels
Not in accordance with its wish or not useful to meet its lust
For just anything it may desire or not in match with it's thirst.

Whatever they are they'll have to perish be it an animal or plant
The race human as if has conquered the right to decide and grant
The bliss of life to which it feels will act for its selfish interest
And ensure it's shameless regime on earth and to kill the rest!






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Comments about The Animal I Fear Most by Palas Kumar Ray

  • Rookie - 0 Points Christine Kerr (3/6/2009 8:06:00 AM)

    This is a great poem Palas, I've been wondering how could you put in words of all the cruelty man has done to all the animals, plants sea. Human kind, and you did it beautifully all in one. This one is indeed a keeper. Very well put Thankyou (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Elbert Matt Loubser (3/3/2009 8:29:00 AM)

    well written, and true. interisting twist in the intro (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 379 Points Marie Shine (2/23/2009 1:34:00 PM)

    An absolutely wonderfully written poem Palas on mans' inhumanity to man. Well done. A 10 from me. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Rita Shay (1/19/2009 4:47:00 PM)

    I really enjoyed the first few lines. You took the poem in a different direction than I assumed you would after the first couple of lines. Well done
    -Rita (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 301 Points Marilyn Lott (1/19/2009 6:29:00 AM)

    This is so true. Animals kill for survival and humans often kill for some sort of sick satisfaction. Thank your for sharing your wisdom and insight and for your wonderful comments on my poems, my friend. A '10+! '

    Warm Wishes,
    Marilyn (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sandra Fowler (1/15/2009 4:05:00 AM)

    Very well expressed. The human animal is indeed the one to be feared.

    As always,

    Sandra (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Duncan Wyllie (1/14/2009 11:57:00 AM)

    There is a lot of truth in this poem

    Love duncan X (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Dr Hitesh Sheth (1/13/2009 10:56:00 AM)

    Just reading title i predicted
    that it must be human
    and I am right.........................
    Good write..... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mamta Agarwal (1/11/2009 1:06:00 AM)

    Palas, you are right- humans are the only species that kill for pleasure and find justification for thei evil deeds. i will go one step further and say- we are our worst enemies. well expressed10

    not to miss the title- man never rosre above animal instincts.

    Mamta (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Bob Blackwell (1/7/2009 12:47:00 PM)

    Palas, your thoughts are oh so true, we even kill each other. Bob (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 80 Points Kesav Easwaran (1/7/2009 5:23:00 AM)

    good content...very emphatically you raise your concerns here, Palas...10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 379 Points Indira Renganathan (1/7/2009 1:14:00 AM)

    Angry vegetarian's words, angry civilian's words...great10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, January 6, 2009

Poem Edited: Saturday, June 7, 2014


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