The Archer Who’s Greedy For Venison Poem by nimal dunuhinga

The Archer Who’s Greedy For Venison

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A golden antelope jumps in a rainforest.
In the moonlit night the ardent archer makes his bow and arrows
But this time he is very sensitive about the rare deer.
He used his special arrow for the hunt.
The deer ran away with the pierced arrow into the jungle.
He followed the woman like cry and Alas! He saw a Nymph was lying on the grass in cold blood.
She stammered “Caveman love is tastier than venison
But it’s too late now my dear.”
She died on his lap sadly.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Wood 10 December 2020

Ok love this poem, I feel I am there.

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Sandra Fowler 11 December 2006

Death is more final than all of our dreams. What a tragic poem. No happily ever after here it would seem. Write on, Nimal. Kindest regards, Sandra

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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