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Scotty Dogg

Rookie - 72 Points (Don't rightly remember. They always called me Dogg / The Potato Fields, Indiana)

The Bad Poem


I'll lash you up foul poem,
And bind you in three knots.
I'll twist you till your stars
Won't shine, and
Your roses start to rot.

We'll burrow out a tiny hole
And plant you in the clay.
We'll put a muzzle on
Your moans so
Your whispers fade away.

Submitted: Thursday, December 20, 2012
Edited: Saturday, October 12, 2013

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  • Gold Star - 12,205 Points Valsa George (12/15/2013 2:29:00 AM)

    Don't strangle and stifle it to death! Let it breathe, so that it might please someone! Very interesting!

    I have never sung the dirge of any poem! However bad it is, I see that it survives! ! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,035 Points Kanav Justa (10/29/2013 2:14:00 PM)

    haha, , , , i have got so many of them, , , would need your help... to burry them, , , (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 247 Points Laughing@ You (10/25/2013 12:50:00 PM)

    SD, this is very funny and light. Reminds of the late, great Herbert Nehrlich's work (and trust me, that is a compliment; he was a master rhymer!) . (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 3,842 Points Bri Edwards (10/12/2013 3:13:00 PM)

    i KNEW this sounded familiar! who can remember all that has happened in the last three months? and i still like this....a lot. ya know, i used to write 'til for until, until i found that till is proper. your poem has 'till. i think that is a hybrid. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 3,842 Points Bri Edwards (7/31/2013 4:24:00 PM)

    which one of mine WAS it? now that i have read it again, i notice you haven't done all that YET. or have you by now? or are you just a lot of hot air? you are really a pussy cat, not a dogg, right? and you wouldn't REALLY harm a poor little poem. to quote Sandy Player, below, Poor thing; it ain't it's fault. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Aria Siren (5/28/2013 10:44:00 AM)

    All of the sudden the poems in my graveyard started screaming at me. I better add another thick layer of cement over their gaping mouths. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 33 Points Sandy Player (12/31/2012 5:33:00 PM)

    We can feel your abuse of the bad poem as we read. Poor thing; it ain't it's fault. Ahhhhhh! I admit! The blame goes to me! ! ! Woe and more woe... (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,944 Points Valerie Dohren (12/27/2012 2:28:00 PM)

    Oh dear, poor poem - hope none of mine are that bad, but who knows....... Good one Scotty. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 812 Points Unwritten Soul (12/26/2012 1:14:00 PM)

    The rhythm really fun to come out from mouth after reading this, what i know this is not the bad poem...not bad poem_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 6,774 Points * Sunprincess * (12/24/2012 8:24:00 PM)

    love this one dear..sure you know how to tame
    those bad poems..hahaha..sending you and
    your family wishes for a merry christmas and
    a happy new year with lots of love! (Report) Reply

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