Jeffrey McDaniel

Rookie (1967 / Philadelphia, Pennsylvania)

The Benjamin Franklin Of Monogamy - Poem by Jeffrey McDaniel

Reminiscing in the drizzle of Portland, I notice
the ring that's landed on your finger, a massive
insect of glitter, a chandelier shining at the end
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Comments about The Benjamin Franklin Of Monogamy by Jeffrey McDaniel

  • Rookie Greenwolfe 1962 (2/8/2008 7:14:00 PM)

    Well, this is a well written piece of short prose which has a
    rather nice flow of word sounds to enhance the message.
    This would make a rather nice segment of a loving short
    story which could be expanded by creative minds into
    a nice Hallmark Hall OF Fame production for television.
    That's not going to happen, so this medium will have
    to do. Fortunately, the writer is up to the task.

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    3 person liked.
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