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One day the sky is gonna swallow us up
Take our souls and our sanity
Then it won't matter who messed up
Existence was merely a fantasy
One day the world just might stop spinning
And with some luck, maybe you'll stop grinning
Get down from the pedestal where you're sitting
Crawl into a hole; that would be more fitting
All this time spent was to let you go
And I'll never get back what went out that window
But it's just not fair
How you just don't care
How you'll hurt me at any cost
How you're watching me, laughing,
While my heart is cracking
And I'm weeping for all that I lost
Vaida Marea
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Sunday, November 25, 2007 |
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Tuesday, April 26, 2011 |
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Comments about this poem (The Bitter End
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Vaida Marea
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Tom J. Mariani (11/25/2007 10:15:00 AM)
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Good job of comparing the theoretical end of the world to the actual biitter end of a relationship. It may not feel like it, or be of any help, but someone always has it worse than we do. Take poor Superman. In today's Sunday comics in 'Bizarro.' The first frame has his parents putting him as an infant in a small space ship to escape a dying planet. The final frame is an adult Superman reading the paper about 'Climate Change' and earth being a dying planet. His words are 'NOT AGAIN! ' I wish your persona in your poem better luck with the next one who walks in through the door than with the one that went out the window.
Tom
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Tiffanie Lau (11/25/2007 8:40:00 AM)
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very bitter indeed. but i guess looking at endings always make us sad, regardless of how splendid the journey might have been.
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