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' The BLACK AUTUMN

Comes the cold, black, wake of autumn,
harbouring its' pique on naked limb;
damp, feral winds astir
to the stalking, hawking,
and hideous squawking...
of ominous, impetuous birds;
large and intrusively pestilent,
inexorabally circling,
'neath the late day shadows
of a cold november sunfall.

And the crows of Autumn, wear angry eyes,
the kind you felt on the back of your neck
when you read Edgar Allan's ''Raven''.
Teasing the breeze-spun tumbleweeds,
as they roll over cornfields... spewing-
threads and shard of stick, and husk,
gaunt signs of a harvest dying.
Clouds bleed deep sage, and drape
over the foreboding presence
of these dark-winged beasts in flock,
fecklessly searching for any sign
that autumn had not yet abandoned them.

Dark and black, blackest black, hovering,
over the last man standing,
in this smoke-dry field,
rigidly stationed with stoic poise,
donned in spirited, tattered plaid,
guardian of the harvest,
protector of the field,
intrepidly perched over its cornucopia
of waning autumntide-offerings.
Thus, hanging upon six feet of wood
stands the Scarecrow,
weathered, yet sturdy,
in a pose of crucifixion.

And, the taunting begins,
with a strident kick of breeze,
as the crows fly low, in arrowed flank,
with bitter, and arrogance-
their Autumn slipping away.
Swooping to the gust of a winter prelude,
obsessively circling, their black eyes gleaming,
the strawman succumbs
to a wind-flounced dance,
and to the evil delight of its menacing prey,
while Wind choirs strond...in loud soprano
like high-pitched fifes on air.

And Autumn dies colourless;
bare, brittle in burial.
No Death Hymn be sung
as winter seals its casket.
And the crows, cold and jaded,
fly away as they came,
wreak havoc south of cotton
untill the April month -
when melting ice unveils
fresh buds on lonesome branches
of a Spring awaiting breath,
and hence, they come again
once again...and stay they will
'til the next black Autumn.

Submitted: Thursday, May 21, 2009
Edited: Monday, April 22, 2013


Comments about this poem (' The BLACK AUTUMN by Frank James Ryan Jr...FjR )

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  • Andy Quach (10/7/2009 11:40:00 PM)

    hey frank, i love this piece! the way you intertwine each stanza with images is exceptional. i also love the allusion of Poe's 'The Raven' and how that works into the rest of the poem itself.

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  • fleur de lys (8/26/2009 2:19:00 AM)

    I love the beauty of your language and imagery. You have taken the mundane and turned it into truly extraordinary art.

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  • Michael Gale (5/27/2009 10:07:00 AM)

    Autumn's death, as in life, must go full circle in it's run. Great conTENts Frank!

    God bless us all-MJG.

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  • Myrtle Thomas (5/23/2009 3:19:00 PM)

    I have to agree with Fiona reading the descriptions Frank writes are like looking through his eyes, crisp and clear.a grand poem.thanks

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  • T McH (5/21/2009 8:56:00 AM)

    An absolutely enchanting work of art F... visual, tangible. t x

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  • Fiona Davidson (5/21/2009 5:19:00 AM)

    Another one of Franks wonderful pieces...like taking a walk through his eyes...and thank you for re-posting it for him...Fi 10++++

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  • Catrina Heart (5/21/2009 4:21:00 AM)

    nature imagery interconnected to humanity.......crafted in excellence! ...10 +++++++

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  • Yoonoos Peerbocus (5/21/2009 4:17:00 AM)

    creative season linked to life cycle as lived earthly finite life......

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