The Bliss Train Is Rollin'! (Coins On The Train Track) Poem by Chuy Amante

The Bliss Train Is Rollin'! (Coins On The Train Track)

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The bliss train is rollin'
gatherin' steam
this train keeps a rollin'
right thru my scene

The Bliss train is rollin'
no longer with brakes
train moves faster
with each risk it takes

the Bliss train is rollin'
at last I'm on board
no dissonance now
we're playing our chord

Tuesday, November 18, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Neela Nath Das 19 November 2014

Wow! Let the bliss train move faster. It seems it's a rhyme for children.But, it has the inner layer of meaning.A lovely poem.

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