Ronald Peat

Rookie - 27 Points (4/24/42 / California)

The Breeze Of You - Poem by Ronald Peat

The Breeze Of You

A bird without a shadow
is silk without sunshine.

Did a patch of blue
get lost somewhere?

I think I hear it rattling
in your apron pocket.

Best cut a blue-bird
from out of the sky

to mend that big hole
that's torn in tomorrow.


-notes
© RH Peat 6/14/2010 2: 51pm
Form: 5 couplets/ 10 line
Intent: Poem without a title.
the un-named child that’s lost.

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, June 16, 2010



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