Into the brown bear was the bullet,
Passing through as if adequate.
It was a Kodiak bear, in Alaska,
Opening too much, clever as a comma,
Frustrating the children of our family
Without the concern for their safety.
Sadly, we circumvented the monster,
Inside the region of the debtor.
We perceive and discern the awkward tree,
This cone-bearing tree too banging and mighty.
We instead deceived the bear, always roaring,
Like a grizzly, but not at all, just defying.
deep stuff naveed...fantastic similitude...if i have it right with ur poems... iv done many i usually find myself out of depth...and hence no comment previously nice one these lines cheers
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I would like to translate this poem
What a deepth.......... Great job................