The Burn Of Acid Poem by Bethany Maxwell

The Burn Of Acid

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The liquid falls over their body
as they scream in agony

The burning burns their skin
as you stand and watch

They thrash at the chains
to free their uncovered body

They scream
as you smirk and laugh

The acid covers their body
as it rips through them in search of their soul

Their eyes shut as the acid falls in them
as they loose their sight

The room goes scilent
as the acid does it's job

You smile
as you add another tally to your winning streak

Their bod lays still chains around their hands and feet
As you smile and walk away

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
LOVEFOOL Aka 18 March 2008

very dark very disturbing I loved it

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