The Cave Poem by John Kay

The Cave



I left the road, tramped
in the fields until I came

to a forest growing dark.
I entered, moving from

tree to tree- on my way
without the moon, until

I entered a cave and lost
my center. I turned my

collar up against the cold,
- withdrawing my life

to see if anyone would
follow and fish it out.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Interesting poem! It is the darkness within that needs to be fought against…

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Ali A 07 May 2020

This was very peaceful but was short

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Don Mcwilliams 08 May 2018

Lovely, this. Does anyone follow? Nah, and then you walk out into the rising light.

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Sue Ann Simar 20 June 2013

Hmmm, I don't think this is the typical man-cave. I'd fish you out if I could, but I think this is part of the journey you are required to make in your quest as a wordsmith. Keep the collar turned up against the cold- my favorite detail.

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