The Chant Of War Poem by Vincent Dali

The Chant Of War

Rating: 5.0


(Holla) Rain, Rain
Go Away
Come Again Another Day

(Holla) Pain, Pain
Dispel
Come Again Some Other Way

Holla With A Strain, Strain
You Won't Get Blown Away
Live To Fight Just One More Day

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Leslie Ching 22 February 2009

full of determination and very upbeat...if only people thought of your chant every time they felt like giving up/in, perserverance might be a much more common quality today...

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Stacey Watts 17 February 2009

Very good piece with a nice beat. Awesome job!

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 02 February 2009

Lets war be by war.................lets win the war.......and win back our life.Nice chant.

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Hope Wallin 25 January 2009

Very nice! I like the last stanza, it's really awesome!

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