The Child Within Poem by Sameer Ahmed

The Child Within

Rating: 5.0


Innocent and pure
Our success and joys
It feels to the core.
Saddened and suppressed
We feel obscure
It shows the way
To a lively shore
With a wavily welcome
And a friendly roar.

Our blunders
And mistakes
Make it mingy
And loneliness we feel
In this state of dingy
Yet, if we repent
It is zealous and zingy.

A father
A mother
A sister
And a brother
It's master of disguise
Can be a teacher
Hard to recognize.

Inside it dwells
With an outward force
Like water from
The artesian wells.
Hesitated and afraid
Of worldly hells.
Age not a criteria
For it remains a child
Till end of the class
And ringing of the bells!




(4/20/2009)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cindy Kreiner Sera 20 April 2009

Lose not the child within...by making mistakes in life we learn, a wonderful write Sameer.

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Sandra Fowler 30 April 2009

A very wise and insightful write. Your last stanza is especially appealing. Your father must be very proud of you. Always your friend, Sandra

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Faran Khalid 25 May 2009

Zabrdast keep it up gud work bro.........

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Bob Blackwell 06 June 2009

It is the child in us that gives us life, no matter what the age. thank you keep writing. Bob

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Bob Blackwell 26 July 2009

The child within is life itself, don't ever lose it.

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Vanita Thakkar 10 June 2009

The title catches attention. One can be child-like or childish - the former being the positive aspect of remaining a child within and the latter the opposite of that. The (child-like) child within keeps one alive.

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Rajaram Ramachandran 09 June 2009

As the young poet says Home is the best University where one can learn many worldly lessons.

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Daniel Hooks 08 June 2009

it is not easy to grow up this poem porteys that my friend said recently that we never do and maybe that is true we have a spirtual father that being God. Maybe its a good thing that we never grow up jesus says to enter the kingdom of heaven you have to be as or like a child so maybe there is something in that what do you think Sameer?

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Wojja Fink 07 June 2009

He who isn't busy being born is busy dying (Bob Dylan) ................keep going Sameer..

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