Brian P FitzGerald


The Church - Poem by Brian P FitzGerald

My heart is held in icy grip
A biting wind now takes my breath
Along the path I struggle and slip
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Comments about The Church by Brian P FitzGerald

  • Rookie - 107 Points Efe Benjamin (9/19/2013 11:40:00 AM)

    great piece, enjoyed every line, the intensity of death lurking, not even with the church, priest and prayers could it be subsided, shows the inevitability of death, lovely and inspiring poem (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Yong Son (9/19/2013 11:28:00 AM)

    You had a visually vivid imagery, and the chilling touch of the church felt the goose bumps through my skin. Awesome job! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Yong Son (9/19/2013 11:22:00 AM)

    Very vivid images and haunting cold imageries. Great visual and good cold senses! (Report) Reply








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