The Completion Of My World Poem by Leslie Rodriguez

The Completion Of My World



Your light shines on when the stars don't anymore
Your heart sings when the orchestra don't roar
Your eyes dance; a glimmering of strength
When the world's dancers can't compete to any length
Your soul burns when all fires are put out
Your fragrance breathes when all blooms are withered beyond doubt
Your values stand tall when the birds can't soar so high
Your all mistakes depart when I cannot say good-bye
When I can't find something here to make my living whole
Your whole entirety is the completion of my world

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When I can't find something here to make my living whole Your whole entirety is the completion of my world..... what an inside though full of meaning loud and clear... i love it. keep writing. Read mine'Silence please and send msg to poet.. that is me.

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sky dreams 15 June 2009

This is a beautiful poem.. great write =)

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