The Conscious Mind Poem by Tom Billsborough

The Conscious Mind

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You are the now, I your past event,
Disguised as consciousness,
The living model of your intent.
My senses swarm like bees,
Perpetually in motion,
Collecting nectar with mechanical ease,
Whilst you create the honey,
Which, as an afterthought,
I am allowed to see.

Wednesday, September 6, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: concious
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Annette Aitken 11 September 2017

Hi Tom, I love the vision of the sense swarming like bees, an excellent visual. as usual another lovely piece.

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Tom Billsborough 11 September 2017

Thanks Anna. I was looking at the Dahlias a the time. The bees love them and and the Snapdragon too!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 September 2017

In consciousness living model of consciousness of internet seems to be like sense of bees. An amazing sharing is done here. This is interesting poem is shared....10

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Tom Billsborough 06 September 2017

Yes, I had the image of the mind as a hive, . As you say rather like the Internet. That's a good point, Kumarmani.

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