The Core Poem by Nika McGuin

The Core

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It has been a year
of utter outward evolutions
the skin has changed, the voice deepened
as onlookers, we can only hope that the core
has remained the same, or betterment has ensued

We can't help but express our distress
that so much in so many has been remodeled and reformed
not realizing, just how much we too have changed

Our only assuagement is the core,
the innermost part of the soul that never changes
the one piece that can never be tampered with,
that can never become impure, the core
assures us that some things
never completely change

The Core
Thursday, December 4, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: change
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Most of this was written on Thanksgiving day while sitting at the table. I looked around at my family members and saw how much they'd each changed in the span of a year. I also saw that some things about them are steadfast and never changing. My little cousins have grown up so much too and they think they're men now, but I know that at their core they'll always be the little boys I knew.'No matter how large an apple may grow, at it's core lie the same seeds' ~Nika
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Julia Luber 10 March 2019

About how our souls are the core of our beings and that no matter how much we can outwardly change, our souls always remain our selves. Evocative and holy.

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Daniel Brick 06 December 2014

This is a Poem of the Soul - you use the word CORE to give the reader a visual parallel to your meaning. It is the steadfast interior of each of us; it is the source of energy and the guide of outer change but remains whole and complete despite external changes. And the common table around which your loved ones gathered gave you the opportunity to witness and assess this process. This is an elusive, often missed moment but you have preserved in your poem because of your keen attention during the dinner. The outer Nika was a participant, the inner Nika was an observer. The poem celebrates both Nikas!

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A K Das Mridul 04 December 2014

Nice intro and poem.

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