The Cosmos Turns Wild (In A Dream) Poem by kanav justa
The Cosmos Turns Wild (In A Dream)
into the night sky
gazing up at the shining pearls
at my balcony in peace i lay
as my thoughts in the night unfurls
staring at the world far far away
adorned by the stars was the night
i explored the sky, heart filled with joy
as my eyes travelled distances infinite
the night was dark but not the stars
they shone like the gems in the sky
and at the earth, there were songs from the bugs
in background i heard some owls cry
alone I was in a solitary night
soon i was talking to the stars
each one of them was my childhood friend
face of the moon marked with some scars
thereupon i saw a falling star
that broke the silence of the night
night was getting dark and dim
and the sky spoke of his plight
and soon the sky was no longer the same
as the stars started to disappear
what saw my eye, only made me insane
and darkness not the only fear
still staring at the sky black
my true friends they were all gone
consumed alive by the forces dark
the end of the world had come
a funeral in the night of the immortal stars
i had seen in front of my eye
night was a widow, without her pearls
and the moon i could hear him cry
soon i could see my parents around
all hope lost in their eye
for they knew, our time had come
it was raining death from sky
soon those forces would come to earth
they would rip us all apart
with broken words I tried to tell
I spoke all from my heart
what it meant for me to have
someone like you always around
i could sense my moving lips
but lost was all my sound
and as the world ends in peace tonight
there be no soul left alone
in your arms, gladly i would die
and none is left to mourn
The dark sky and its hidden things make fine subjects for poetry and Kanav`s eyes and mind have captured a few of them brilliantly... Here is a reflection of it... A fine write.
an epic write up, kanav! i felt Hyperion in a scene...thanks for this write!
From a winsome title to rhymin skill this was one of yor most fabulous poem mr. Kash! Wows!
A truly spectacular poem dear Kanav. We sorely miss your poems on Poem Hunter. I am proud to add this poem to 'my poem list.' Wishing you all the best in life and in your endeavor.
Wonderful imagery Kanav.Rachel is right.It seems everything is going on before our eyes!
...........loved the first two stanzas the best.....they have an intimate feel to them....love being alone on a warm summer's night looking at the stars......it's like you carried me there to the balcony to look upon the twinkling stars in the beautiful night sky.....loved reading every line... ...................................................~~~~~~ LOVE LOVE LOVE ~~~~~~.............................................
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I would like to translate this poem
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and as the world ends in peace tonight there be no soul left alone in your arms, gladly i would die and none is left to mourn................... A beautiful end................ ]] I am glad that this nocturnal scene was a dream That fades away, scorched by sun's bright gleam...... But deathly figures that dance about, and in your visions frighteningly loom, Towards the judgement that awaits, we humans go, into the arms of ending doom................................ .............................A lovely write my friend, a 10 for u.......