! The Couple In The Evening Class Poem by Michael Shepherd

! The Couple In The Evening Class

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As the new year’s evening class
filed in, in varying displays of enthusiasm or cool,
discreetly summing up their tutor
you couldn’t help but notice them
despite their modest manner –
of equal height, and that a little under average

couples attending class together
always catch my too premature thoughts –
has he brought her? has she brought him?
is this just a stage in careful courtship,
attending a class together?
where will they sit? couples tend to choose
the front row or the back, I’ve noticed;
often arrive at ease, as if they’ve met up after work,
taken a coffee or a light snack…
which will ask a question first? and when they do,
will some slight frisson of emotional thought-wave
pass between them? suppose after the first term,
one leaves, one stays – will the one who stays, feel freer
to ask more questions? or will I sense
that invisible tug of apron-strings…?

over the weeks, although they gave no overt sign of it,
they became a sweet, still place in the class,
a perfect balance between individuality and togetherness;
when he or she asked a question or gave an answer,
the other radiated almost imperceptibly
a quiet pride so pure that it was more, delight,
as one might do with a son or daughter.

At the end of the year, our paths went their separate ways;
and yet, after so many years, so many classes, so many students,
they’ve left a quiet place in my memory;
of humble simplicity, strength clothed as modesty,
boundless possibility –

they, the silent tutor;
I, the observing student.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 04 December 2017

LAST PART: but I never regard the English movies as such, I oft watch all what is English, because any subject they are treating, is always attractive and has a high standard and quality. English people love to THINK and that is their smartness in all they do.A 10 for this poem.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 04 December 2017

I have enjoyed this poetry full of the most intelligent remarks, just read the end: they, the silent tutor; I, the observing student, I must laugh loudly and hilariously. I regard english movies the best compared with the USA films, where they say no other word than repeating f-ck you constantly during the whole movies, even the famous filmstars have their credit upon these outings,

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Danny Reynolds 02 February 2007

Not a new twist on this, but a nice one. The best teachers are observant and encourage participation. Not just as a guage of how much understanding is in the room, but recognising that a good student(s) can be the best teaching aid at your disposal. They’ve taught you well Mikey. Danny

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