The Crash Poem by Katty Briones

The Crash



Falling in love isn't easy. Its dangerous, like a car crash. You see him walking into the room, you feel your ribs being crushed and your heart stopping for a second. Because you know. You know you're not getting out of this alive. You have always been the shyest person, you don't like talking to people first. Especially if they're this cute. But its this person, that makes you forget why you were nervous in the first place. At first its difficult, you're both tiptoeing around each other, thinking "i hope they don't break my heart". When you touch for the first time, it flows through your body like sunlight hitting cold skin. When you kiss for the first time its like you've transported to space, you feel stars all around you. You hate your body, but he will kiss every inch of it like your skin is made of gold. He will hold you when you cant hold yourself together, he will keep you safe. He will love you until the ground will swallow him up and even then he will still be reaching for you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 24 June 2014

.... you've transported to space, ......don't forget the been. :) wow! this sounds so mature. i mean like it is written by a (very) mature WRITER. are you sure you are a teen who is experiencing doubts about yourself? ? ? are you making up your bio and your poem, i am a mess? ? hmmm? . it is a little over the top in the 'romance' area for my unromantic mind, but lots of people will eat it up. i even like it just the same. the first and last lines are great and the filling is tasty as well! good work, you 'pro'. :) bri this will go to MyPoemList.

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* Sunprincess * 24 June 2014

.............wow this is how i feel about someone special......enjoyed this beautiful write....

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