Raymond Valadez

Rookie (12-21-1982 / Mexico)

The day you left


The day you left you took all my dreams away.
The day you left you made all my colors turn grey.
The day you left all my poem became a tragedy.
The day you left you erase all our family.
The day you left you nearly destroyed me
The day you left that same day I cried with no one to console me.
The day you left I fell to the ground.
The day you left I could not see no one around.
The day you left eternity became a curse.
The day you left you chose you first.
The day you left I was left all alone
The day you left I hated that place we called home.
The day you left only my pain was my companion
The day you left I seized been the champion
The day you left everything became solitude
The day you left I knew I had to learn how to stop loving you.
But the day you left I know you lost me
And no matter how many men you come across you will
Never ever fine another like me! ! !

Submitted: Saturday, November 21, 2009
Edited: Monday, November 23, 2009

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