The Day You Went Away Poem by Max Soon

The Day You Went Away

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The Day You Went Away

The day you went away,
The stars died,
The moon cried,
And sadness stopped the tide.

The day you went away,
Intolerable pain struck my heart,
Knowing that we'll be apart,
Accepting this is always hard.

The day you went away,
I fell into the valley of despair,
Missing you so much but you're not there,
I'll search for you no matter where.

The day you went away,
I promised you that I will wait,
No matter how long it's gonna take,
Let us leave it to our fate.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tai Chi Italy 03 August 2008

An ungodly painful read Max! I felt every word stabbing my heart. I am sure many will identify with your expression of loss. Excellent poetry....flows like my tears, Tai

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Chris Newlash 02 August 2008

great one, read some of mine maybe you'lll like them

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