The dead drunk I help In their inimitable Way they thank me very Profusely and fart in my Love all of humanity face
Not by any means an expert on the form, but I think the third and fifth lines are both one syllable too many. Other than that, it is a great tanka
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4/25/2024 1:34:25 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Not by any means an expert on the form, but I think the third and fifth lines are both one syllable too many. Other than that, it is a great tanka